Pin-Up Attempt 1

My sister's fiancee wants to get a tattoo of her as a pin up girl. And they asked me to draw it. This is attempt 1. I say attempt 1 because there will probably be many others before I get it right. I'm not exactly happy with how the face came out. I love the pose but not the face and the clothing is meh, so we'll see. I'll show it to her and see what she has to say about it, after that, there will likely be other pin up attempts to follow. Also he mentioned something about having her ride a chocobo, so, who knows....